little girl lost
withthat faraway look, thinkingof a story book fable starring that dragon slayerwho lifted your heart by five finger discount; instead to be leaping across lily pads strapped to an amphibian back like...
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Your style is fresh adn enjoyable. Great imagery and flowing expression.Michael Chellew
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This is a moving piece. My little girl used to call purple grape`l as it is the color of grapes. Faith aka: She Who Hugs A Lot
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Michael Chellew,thanks so much. This was a piece I actually started last year, dug up in my files still in its first draft, and completely gutted. I wrote it for a friend of mine, and the original...
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little girl lostwiththat faraway look, thinkingof a story book fable starring that dragon slayerwho lifted your heart by five finger discount; instead i think what goes on in books should be present...
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pjsnights,sorry for the late reply... I wanted to consider some of your suggestions on how to tighten this up more and must say you have given me some help. Hopefully, this piece won't end up in the...
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